United We Run|Overtime in New York

[Martti.]

You'd have to be a super-quick reader to read the recap.

[dare]

You'd have to be a super-quick reader to read the recap.

Sorry about that man, I'll change the timing

[cavs4872]

Everything looks good so far. Keep this one going.

[Lamrock]

Okay, two big presentation-related things: Font choice. Look at your articles. They simply don't look very good. The font in the first one is readable, but ugly, the second one is ugly, and a bit tough to read, and the third I had to squint to read. I would recommend looking at some of the dynasties in the HOF and compare the presentations in those to this. One thing I do like is the pictures however.

Additionally, learn to use paragraphs. Its very difficult to read a big block of text. Space it out. I don't mean to pick on you or anything, this has potential, but there are just a few beginner's mistakes that need to be hammered out for this to be a top-tier dynasty. Check out my first. Epic fail, right?

[dare]

@HyperDunk24 tnx man hope you follow

@Lamrock tnx for the comment Lamrock, I'll fix my presentations from now on..

[dare]

[Lamrock]

Still not feeling the font. Try taking that recap and changing the font to Arial. I guarantee you will see an improvement.

[dare]

Ok Lamrock I'll try, tnx for another suggestion



Edit:
I already change it Lamrock

[dare]

NLSC Draftees
Fill it out and sent it to me through PM.

First Name :
Last Name :
Jersey # :
Date of birth :
Weight :
Height :
Primary position :
Secondary position :
College :
Nationality :
Skin tone : (some NBA player to compare, ex Chris Paul or Kyle Korver)
NBA similarity :
Strengths : (5)
Weaknesses : (5)
Other features : Bands, sleeves etc.


I only copy Martti's format

[dare]

Here's the schedule of the games that I will play :

[dare]

[|)e8*]

My Predictions
22-23
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Corey Brewer, Jonny Flynn
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Gomes
Assists- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Nathan Jawai
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin, Corey Brewer


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Terrence Williams
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Tyreke Evans
(Dec)-Stephen Curry
(Jan)- Blake Griffin

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- LeBron James
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - Dwayne Wade

West-
(Nov)- Chris Paul
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Carmelo Anthony

[Dee.]

Nuggets crushed you.
You could have a trade or two,now it's very hard as i see.

[Kenny]

Tough break against the Nuggets. Here's hoping you can pick it up against the Lakers

[Lamrock]

Okay, so the recap is yet another big improvement, but the website format really hinders it. I would recommend ditching the rest of the things that are on the real website to reduce clutter, and un-bold the text.

First Name : Liam
Last Name : Washburn
Jersey # : 7
Date of birth : June 12, 1990 (age changed for eligibility)
Weight : 205
Height : 6'2"
Primary position : PG
Secondary position : SG
College : Washington
Nationality : Caucasian American
Skin tone : White, A bit like... Adam Morrison with medium length brown hair... and no 'stache
NBA similarity : Gary Payton/Gilbert Arenas (Solid defensive point guard with great B-Ball IQ, but shoot-first mentality - capable SG)
Strengths : (5) 3pt shooting, primacy, offensive awareness, defensive awareness, steals
Weaknesses : (5) Offensive Rebounding, Defensive Rebounding, Post Skills, Blocks, Leaping ability
Other features : None.

My Predictions

Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Gomes
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Nathan Jawai
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Corey Brewer


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Terrence Williams
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Jonny Flynn
(Jan)- Jonny Flynn

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- LeBron James
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Chris Paul
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

[C-77]

My Predictions: (sorry for being late )
Team Record: 20-25
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Hollins
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Damien Wilkins


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- DeMar Derozan

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Tyreke Evans
(Jan)- Tyreke Evans

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

[dare]

@TheDee Yeah we were totally crushed, This team don't have a consistent scorer a change will come very soon

@badreligionau We struggle at the Nuggets what should I expect with the Lakers

@Lamrock Again man tnx your suggestions and comments are the best.

@C-77 no worries man its alright


To All who have predicted you missed this part : T-Wolves record(45 games):

Ex:
T-Wolves record(45 games): 45-0
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Hollins
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Damien Wilkins


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- DeMar Derozan

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Tyreke Evans
(Jan)- Tyreke Evans

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

sorry if you dont understand my game

BTW if you want a cyberface just pm it to me

[Martti.]

T-Wolves record(45 games): 18-27
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Al Jefferson
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer, Damien Wilkins

Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings
West-
(Nov)-Blake Griffin
(Dec)-Blake Griffin
(Jan)- Blake Griffin

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)-Dwyane Wade
(Jan) - Dwyane Wade

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Jan)- Dirk Nowitzki

Start Brewer!

[dare]

SIM GAMES
NOV 4: MIN@NY 100-102 BOXSCORES
NOV 6: ORL@MIN 130-84 BOXSCORES

[Lamrock]

Wouldn't that be considered two moves? Anyway, very fair transactions. They make your team better in the short-term, but you don't sacrifice too much of your future. It is likely that Prince will be dealt for a similar package, while Dalembert is on the Sixers trading block IRL. Unless there is another deal coming, it sucks for Kevin Love though... I would personally like a Love + Flynn for star SG trade)

[dare]

Lamrock Sorry for the miss typed , Actually Id tried to get Grant Hill but the Phoenix Suns just wouldn't give him to me.

Here's my Rotation:
Starting Line-up:
C- Dalembert
PF- Jefferson
SF- Prince
SG- Pavlovic
PG -Flynn
6th-Love
7th-Sessions
8th-Brewer
9th-Martin
10th-Williams
11th-Hollins
12th-Jawai

btw did you change your predictions? you forgot the standings

[Lamrock]

Don't like your depth chart. Benching your second and third best players (Love and Sessions) doesn't make sense. For my predictions I just copied the first guy and made a couple amendments. Here are mine then I guess:

T-Wolves record(45 games): 27-18
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Tayshaun Prince, Jonny Flynn
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Samuel Dalembert
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Sasha Pavlovic
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Samuel Dalembert, Tayshaun Prince
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer, Ramon Sessions


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Jonny Flynn
(Jan)-Jonny Flynn

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Brian Scalabrine
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Kobe Bryant
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Kobe Bryant

[dare]

Well I like to have fire power off the bench and besides their going to play more minutes than Dalembert and Pavlovic about your predictions just edit them and put the standings

[C-77]

dare019, edited my predictions

[dare]