United We Run|Overtime in New York

You'd have to be a super-quick reader to read the recap.

You'd have to be a super-quick reader to read the recap.

Sorry about that man, I'll change the timing

Everything looks good so far. Keep this one going.

Okay, two big presentation-related things: Font choice. Look at your articles. They simply don't look very good. The font in the first one is readable, but ugly, the second one is ugly, and a bit tough to read, and the third I had to squint to read. I would recommend looking at some of the dynasties in the HOF and compare the presentations in those to this. One thing I do like is the pictures however.

Additionally, learn to use paragraphs. Its very difficult to read a big block of text. Space it out. I don't mean to pick on you or anything, this has potential, but there are just a few beginner's mistakes that need to be hammered out for this to be a top-tier dynasty. Check out my first. Epic fail, right?

@HyperDunk24 tnx man hope you follow

@Lamrock tnx for the comment Lamrock, I'll fix my presentations from now on..

Last edited by dare on Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:06 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Still not feeling the font. Try taking that recap and changing the font to Arial. I guarantee you will see an improvement.

Ok Lamrock I'll try, tnx for another suggestion



Edit:
I already change it Lamrock

NLSC Draftees
Fill it out and sent it to me through PM.

First Name :
Last Name :
Jersey # :
Date of birth :
Weight :
Height :
Primary position :
Secondary position :
College :
Nationality :
Skin tone : (some NBA player to compare, ex Chris Paul or Kyle Korver)
NBA similarity :
Strengths : (5)
Weaknesses : (5)
Other features : Bands, sleeves etc.


I only copy Martti's format

Here's the schedule of the games that I will play :

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My Predictions
22-23
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Corey Brewer, Jonny Flynn
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Gomes
Assists- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Nathan Jawai
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin, Corey Brewer


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Terrence Williams
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Tyreke Evans
(Dec)-Stephen Curry
(Jan)- Blake Griffin

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- LeBron James
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - Dwayne Wade

West-
(Nov)- Chris Paul
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Carmelo Anthony

Last edited by |)e8* on Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:57 am, edited 1 time in total.

Nuggets crushed you.
You could have a trade or two,now it's very hard as i see.

Tough break against the Nuggets. Here's hoping you can pick it up against the Lakers

Okay, so the recap is yet another big improvement, but the website format really hinders it. I would recommend ditching the rest of the things that are on the real website to reduce clutter, and un-bold the text.

First Name : Liam
Last Name : Washburn
Jersey # : 7
Date of birth : June 12, 1990 (age changed for eligibility)
Weight : 205
Height : 6'2"
Primary position : PG
Secondary position : SG
College : Washington
Nationality : Caucasian American
Skin tone : White, A bit like... Adam Morrison with medium length brown hair... and no 'stache
NBA similarity : Gary Payton/Gilbert Arenas (Solid defensive point guard with great B-Ball IQ, but shoot-first mentality - capable SG)
Strengths : (5) 3pt shooting, primacy, offensive awareness, defensive awareness, steals
Weaknesses : (5) Offensive Rebounding, Defensive Rebounding, Post Skills, Blocks, Leaping ability
Other features : None.

My Predictions

Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Gomes
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Nathan Jawai
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Corey Brewer


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Terrence Williams
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Jonny Flynn
(Jan)- Jonny Flynn

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- LeBron James
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Chris Paul
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

My Predictions: (sorry for being late )
Team Record: 20-25
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Hollins
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Damien Wilkins


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- DeMar Derozan

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Tyreke Evans
(Jan)- Tyreke Evans

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

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@TheDee Yeah we were totally crushed, This team don't have a consistent scorer a change will come very soon

@badreligionau We struggle at the Nuggets what should I expect with the Lakers

@Lamrock Again man tnx your suggestions and comments are the best.

@C-77 no worries man its alright


To All who have predicted you missed this part : T-Wolves record(45 games):

Ex:
T-Wolves record(45 games): 45-0
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Julian Martin
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Ryan Hollins
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Ramon Sessions, Damien Wilkins


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- DeMar Derozan

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Tyreke Evans
(Jan)- Tyreke Evans

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Al Jefferson

sorry if you dont understand my game

BTW if you want a cyberface just pm it to me

T-Wolves record(45 games): 18-27
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Al Jefferson
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Corey Brewer
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer, Damien Wilkins

Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings
West-
(Nov)-Blake Griffin
(Dec)-Blake Griffin
(Jan)- Blake Griffin

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Dwyane Wade
(Dec)-Dwyane Wade
(Jan) - Dwyane Wade

West-
(Nov)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Dec)- Dirk Nowitzki
(Jan)- Dirk Nowitzki

Start Brewer!

SIM GAMES
NOV 4: MIN@NY 100-102 BOXSCORES
NOV 6: ORL@MIN 130-84 BOXSCORES

Wouldn't that be considered two moves? Anyway, very fair transactions. They make your team better in the short-term, but you don't sacrifice too much of your future. It is likely that Prince will be dealt for a similar package, while Dalembert is on the Sixers trading block IRL. Unless there is another deal coming, it sucks for Kevin Love though... I would personally like a Love + Flynn for star SG trade)

Lamrock Sorry for the miss typed , Actually Id tried to get Grant Hill but the Phoenix Suns just wouldn't give him to me.

Here's my Rotation:
Starting Line-up:
C- Dalembert
PF- Jefferson
SF- Prince
SG- Pavlovic
PG -Flynn
6th-Love
7th-Sessions
8th-Brewer
9th-Martin
10th-Williams
11th-Hollins
12th-Jawai

btw did you change your predictions? you forgot the standings

Don't like your depth chart. Benching your second and third best players (Love and Sessions) doesn't make sense. For my predictions I just copied the first guy and made a couple amendments. Here are mine then I guess:

T-Wolves record(45 games): 27-18
Leaders
PPG- Al Jefferson, Tayshaun Prince, Jonny Flynn
Rebounds- Al Jefferson, Kevin Love, Samuel Dalembert
Assists- Ramon Sessions, Jonny Flynn, Sasha Pavlovic
Blocks- Al Jefferson, Samuel Dalembert, Tayshaun Prince
Steals- Jonny Flynn, Corey Brewer, Ramon Sessions


Rookies of The Month
East-
(Nov)-Brandon Jennings
(Dec)-Brandon Jennings
(Jan)- Brandon Jennings

West-
(Nov)-Jonny Flynn
(Dec)-Jonny Flynn
(Jan)-Jonny Flynn

Players of The Month

East-
(Nov)- Brian Scalabrine
(Dec)- LeBron James
(Jan) - LeBron James

West-
(Nov)- Kobe Bryant
(Dec)- Kobe Bryant
(Jan)- Kobe Bryant

Well I like to have fire power off the bench and besides their going to play more minutes than Dalembert and Pavlovic about your predictions just edit them and put the standings

dare019, edited my predictions