by cyanide on Sat Oct 22, 2005 12:32 am
I understand the reasons for having simplicity there, but I have to agree with FendeR that the text isn't very good. Try to keep it within one color instead of one black and in one white, and it looks out of place where you positioned them horizontially. I disagree with FendeR, though, on adding more elements, which would only make it more complicated than it should. Right now, the way I see it, Nas is not the moving, because of his positioning in the center, it looks as if the motion is revolving around him, as if he was dizzy and about to puke. Hence, position him asymetrically. Since this is his last dance, involving his mother who died of cancer, make it a spotlight or someplace dark, because the blue is a little too cheerful for the kind of mood.
if you were killed tomorrow, i WOULDNT GO 2 UR FUNERAL CUZ ID B N JAIL 4 KILLIN THE MOTHA FUCKER THAT KILLED U!
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