Dwight Howard Cyberface- 1st attempt

[jhath]

Hey, this is my first attempt at a cyberface. I know its likely horrendous, so i don't need a bunch of, OMG U SUCK!! stuff, but I really really need constructive criticism on how to fix it up and improve... all the tutorials i could find were at least 2-3 years old and mostly broken linked...

here goes...



thanks!

[NBA KYD3]

IM not a modder, but making the skin a bit smoother under eyes and at cheeks cant hurt. Also, nose appears just a bit wide, all in all much better than my first attempt, or what it would look like.

[kristelonzze]

you made dwight look much older than EA's

[jhath]

alrighty, ill try to fix those parts a little... thanks!

anyone else?

edit: ive made his moustache a little smaller, hoping this will make him a little younger?

[jhath]

here, hows this look?




also, what do i do with the dwhowarr file????

[jhath]

alright, here's two more screenies with a few more adjustments...

[RSox]

It is not much different than EA's.

[jhath]

yea, but any suggestions for making it better?

[anismodi]

My suggestion for you is to keep trying

[RSox]

I think the moustache should be a little bit bigger.

[Lagoa]

Try change color first!

[Elbeen]

i think the lips are too thick

[felix8621]

the cf looks allright and is blended ok u should just fix the lips by making them less thick like elbeen said.

[yusufmothman]

i wanna try it..

[Weiland]

make him look more serious i guess..he looks like he's holding his smile