Need FEEDBACK ||| Juan Dixon v0.001 beta...

[ausar72]

My first patch (hehe!) please be gentle! It's still a work-in-progress. I just want some opinions from the patchmasters on this site. Tips and pointers would also be welcome. I plan on having another round of modifications later in the week.




I'm a Terp alumnus and i'm going go through and update alot of the former Terps that were done wrong by EA . Juan first, then Stevie Franchiise and then probably Wilcox or Baxter.

Also: Can someone provide a good link to a plain white Jersey Template file with pretty good textures? I think I'm going to be making some practice gear as well:D .

Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

((PEACE)) [/b]

[sq322]

The part where the face is meeting the head needs to blended better.
Also,he smiles alot more than he scowls.
Otherwise i think it looks pretty good for a starter

[ausar72]

You are talking about the dark part on the forehead right?

Also, the face i used has a smile, but for some reason he has a scowl when I apply it in the game. Does this have anything to do with the head shape files?

[Dirtdog1- David]

Yes, You need to blend the cheeks and the forehead some more. You should be happy that the headshape closes his mouth a little, or else you would have two set of teeth................. which is worse.

Keep workimg on it, it has potential

David

[hetoft]

My first patch (hehe!) please be gentle! It's still a work-in-progress. I just want some opinions from the patchmasters on this site. Tips and pointers would also be welcome. I plan on having another round of modifications later in the week.




I'm a Terp alumnus and i'm going go through and update alot of the former Terps that were done wrong by EA . Juan first, then Stevie Franchiise and then probably Wilcox or Baxter.

Also: Can someone provide a good link to a plain white Jersey Template file with pretty good textures? I think I'm going to be making some practice gear as well:D .

Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

((PEACE)) [/b]

I think it's a good cyberface for a beginner...

For the jerseys; have you tried JB's tutorial and textures?
Or else, try checking this page http://www.angelfire.com/rpg/ewl/index2.html

Looking forward to that Chris Wilcox face... he hasn't been patched so many times before.