Don’t you love the chase? Sometimes it doesn’t work out; those are the stakes. But when it does work out, it’s like having that first cigarette: your head gets all dizzy, your heart pounds, your knees go weak. Remember that?
dirk is pretty nice, but could you possibly make the ends of his hair curly instead of spiky, and the top not so bulky? like this: as is your dirk is the best ever, just needs a bit more touches to make it perfect