Fri Jan 20, 2006 3:50 pm
I'm going to reply in this thread because Sit wants me too so the chapter is on the next page or some shit.
Sat Jan 21, 2006 12:48 am
Hey Won't Stand,
I finally caught up with your Dynasty, and let me just say... FUCK!.
Its 1:51 AM (Australian time of course), and i read each chapter in full, thats how good this shit is. My prediction is that it was the Barry Johnson (??, the Owner) guy who was in the crash. Anyway, Can't wait for Chapter five.
And also, nice jersey...and as for no practice or coach for your team....Welcome To The Dark Side
Have a good one.
I finally caught up with your Dynasty, and let me just say... FUCK!.
Its 1:51 AM (Australian time of course), and i read each chapter in full, thats how good this shit is. My prediction is that it was the Barry Johnson (??, the Owner) guy who was in the crash. Anyway, Can't wait for Chapter five.
And also, nice jersey...and as for no practice or coach for your team....Welcome To The Dark Side
Have a good one.
Sat Jan 21, 2006 9:22 am
that's what i said. either Sit or johnston were in one of those cars
Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:59 am
Oh ok, next time i wont voice my opinion, because someone else already thinks it.. 
Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:15 pm
kk
Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:12 am
The fanbase? What fanbase? I think chapter 4 didn't get as many replies as usual.. but maybe Chapter 5 will boost ratings! lol
Hey, I would have been glad to get even 3 replies every update in my thread, so consider yourself grateful.
Sun Jan 22, 2006 4:43 pm
haha.. yeah yeah!
ANyways.. sorry boys. Got family trouble... parents wanna kick me out of the house. SO the chapter has been delayed a bit more until I get this all orginised!
ANyways.. sorry boys. Got family trouble... parents wanna kick me out of the house. SO the chapter has been delayed a bit more until I get this all orginised!
Sun Jan 22, 2006 4:46 pm
ur turnin into a regular asian now. hahaha.
hope shit works out man and ill be watching this.
hope shit works out man and ill be watching this.
Sun Jan 22, 2006 4:54 pm
Man... I will always be different. It's just my parents who are too regular for me. Right now, im over at a friends place. looks like i will update this when everything is settled down a bit.
Thanks for the support illuzionz!
Thanks for the support illuzionz!
Sun Jan 22, 2006 4:56 pm
Sit wrote:Man... I will always be different. It's just my parents who are too regular for me. Right now, im over at a friends place. looks like i will update this when everything is settled down a bit.
Thanks for the support illuzionz!
ye bro am here for u.
add this
s-anurak@hotmail.com
Sun Jan 22, 2006 6:35 pm
IN THE MEAN TIME READ MY DYNASTY(CLICK MY SIG) OR AT : http://www.nbaliveforums.com/ftopic33891.php IT'S A BOBCATS DYNASTY, BUT IT'S KINDA LIKE SIT'S, WITH A STORYLINE. SO WHILE YOU WAIT FOR HIS NEXT GREAT(wait, wtf, I was in caps) chapter, check out mine 
Thanks Sit, now I can advertise at your loss. You're not useless rofl. Nah, good dynasty tho, hope u can stay.
Thanks Sit, now I can advertise at your loss. You're not useless rofl. Nah, good dynasty tho, hope u can stay.
Mon Jan 23, 2006 4:48 pm
Thanks for putting an ad in the thread! 
Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:13 pm
right dude..
sit post 5 already
u already have it done right
sit post 5 already
u already have it done right
Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:24 pm
I wrote:Got family trouble... parents wanna kick me out of the house. SO the chapter has been delayed a bit more until I get this all orginised!
- Read Jing Xu! Read! But if you really want a preview of Chapter 5... here it is... Look Down!
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Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:55 pm
Preview: Chapter 5
The rising sun blinded Sit as he woke up to the prodding of his chest. A low voice demanding Sit to wake up drew him away from his sleep. Sit adjusted to the bright light of the early morning sun and he opened his eyes. What he saw certainly shocked him as he scanned what was ahead. Sit was behind the wheel of his and ahead of him, he could see an overturned car. Police swarmed the car ahead, checking it inside and out. Sit tried pinch himself but couldn’t as a lanky police officer with a goatee pull him out of his car. Sit was then turned to face his vehicle and pushed against the passenger door. He felt the cold steel handcuffs slap against his wrists and lock together in a tightening grip. The policeman checked if Sit had anything on him and found his wallet in his back pocket. Pulling it out with one hand, the policeman looked at the drivers’ license carefully.
“Mr William Sit, I suspect that the murder of the man in the other car over there is related to you,” The officer seemingly recited, “You are now under arrest. You have the right to remain silent and anything you say, may and can be used against you in the court of law.”
Sit was then forcefully pulled back from his car and shoved towards a police car. The stronger man pushed Sit into the back of the squad car and accidentally hit him in the head. Unbearable pain rushed through his head as he was thrown onto the seat. Sit struggled to stay awake and he felt colder and colder. A voice shouted out his name. Sit! His whole world turned black as a phone rang.
Sit awoke to the ringing of his home phone. He groaned as he picked up the phone at his bed side.
The clock on his table read 10:34 AM and Sit mumbled into the phone, “Hello.”
“Hey Sit, it’s Albino. Why didn't you pick up before? You going to come down to the office today?”
Sit sat upright and answered, “Yeah, of course. I will come in now. Anything urgent?”
“Not really, we just got some things to do and plus you’re late,” Albino said.
Sit stood up, walked towards the bathroom and picked up his toothbrush to start brushing his teeth, “I will be right there.”
Albino hung up on the other end and Sit continued to get ready for another day at work. His answering machine indicated that there was one new message. Sit pressed the play button and listened to Albino shout his name on the recording. As he put on his suit and got ready to leave, he thought about the dream he had had. That was one weird dream, he thought as he tied up his shoelaces. He walked out of the door, locking it behind him and went outside to find Albino waiting.
“You’re here to pick me up Albino? Thanks a lot man, I’m so glad to see you.”
Albino looked at Sit weirdly, “Anything wrong?”
“Just a bad dream,” Sit replied.
Albino started the car up and the drive into the office was quiet apart from when Sit decided to tell Albino about his dream and whether it meant anything. He told Albino about the time where he had seen a horse race in his sleep and saw the number of the winning horse. Sure enough, Sit would go and bet on that horse to win.
“I won two hundred bucks from that,” Sit proudly exclaimed, “Maybe this time, I’m going to be able to cheat my own death or save another guy’s life! What do you think?”
Albino just shrugged, kept on driving and thought to himself, you're a crazy one!
Albino dropped Sit off at the building’s entrance and he said to his friend, “You better go up quickly before you get into trouble.”
Sit nodded and jumped out of the car and ran inside to catch the next lift up to his office. It was a quick ride up to the top floor of the building as Sit wasted no time to get to his office. As he walked briskly past his secretary, she smiled at him and Sit smiled back.
“Will,” She said, “Good luck.”
He was bewildered by her words, “What do you mean?”
“Nothing,” She replied hastily as she picked up a box of documents and left the room.
Sit straightened his tie with one hand before opening his office door. There was a loud thump as Sit dropped his briefcase. There was a familiar man sitting at his desk…
The rising sun blinded Sit as he woke up to the prodding of his chest. A low voice demanding Sit to wake up drew him away from his sleep. Sit adjusted to the bright light of the early morning sun and he opened his eyes. What he saw certainly shocked him as he scanned what was ahead. Sit was behind the wheel of his and ahead of him, he could see an overturned car. Police swarmed the car ahead, checking it inside and out. Sit tried pinch himself but couldn’t as a lanky police officer with a goatee pull him out of his car. Sit was then turned to face his vehicle and pushed against the passenger door. He felt the cold steel handcuffs slap against his wrists and lock together in a tightening grip. The policeman checked if Sit had anything on him and found his wallet in his back pocket. Pulling it out with one hand, the policeman looked at the drivers’ license carefully.
“Mr William Sit, I suspect that the murder of the man in the other car over there is related to you,” The officer seemingly recited, “You are now under arrest. You have the right to remain silent and anything you say, may and can be used against you in the court of law.”
Sit was then forcefully pulled back from his car and shoved towards a police car. The stronger man pushed Sit into the back of the squad car and accidentally hit him in the head. Unbearable pain rushed through his head as he was thrown onto the seat. Sit struggled to stay awake and he felt colder and colder. A voice shouted out his name. Sit! His whole world turned black as a phone rang.
Sit awoke to the ringing of his home phone. He groaned as he picked up the phone at his bed side.
The clock on his table read 10:34 AM and Sit mumbled into the phone, “Hello.”
“Hey Sit, it’s Albino. Why didn't you pick up before? You going to come down to the office today?”
Sit sat upright and answered, “Yeah, of course. I will come in now. Anything urgent?”
“Not really, we just got some things to do and plus you’re late,” Albino said.
Sit stood up, walked towards the bathroom and picked up his toothbrush to start brushing his teeth, “I will be right there.”
Albino hung up on the other end and Sit continued to get ready for another day at work. His answering machine indicated that there was one new message. Sit pressed the play button and listened to Albino shout his name on the recording. As he put on his suit and got ready to leave, he thought about the dream he had had. That was one weird dream, he thought as he tied up his shoelaces. He walked out of the door, locking it behind him and went outside to find Albino waiting.
“You’re here to pick me up Albino? Thanks a lot man, I’m so glad to see you.”
Albino looked at Sit weirdly, “Anything wrong?”
“Just a bad dream,” Sit replied.
Albino started the car up and the drive into the office was quiet apart from when Sit decided to tell Albino about his dream and whether it meant anything. He told Albino about the time where he had seen a horse race in his sleep and saw the number of the winning horse. Sure enough, Sit would go and bet on that horse to win.
“I won two hundred bucks from that,” Sit proudly exclaimed, “Maybe this time, I’m going to be able to cheat my own death or save another guy’s life! What do you think?”
Albino just shrugged, kept on driving and thought to himself, you're a crazy one!
Albino dropped Sit off at the building’s entrance and he said to his friend, “You better go up quickly before you get into trouble.”
Sit nodded and jumped out of the car and ran inside to catch the next lift up to his office. It was a quick ride up to the top floor of the building as Sit wasted no time to get to his office. As he walked briskly past his secretary, she smiled at him and Sit smiled back.
“Will,” She said, “Good luck.”
He was bewildered by her words, “What do you mean?”
“Nothing,” She replied hastily as she picked up a box of documents and left the room.
Sit straightened his tie with one hand before opening his office door. There was a loud thump as Sit dropped his briefcase. There was a familiar man sitting at his desk…
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Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:09 pm
Long read. I will read it after man. I am watching a movie right now and I got distracted too many times. Haha. Everything fine now man ?
Check out my dynasty if you got the time bro
Check out my dynasty if you got the time bro
Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:13 pm
Nice preview, can't wait till the full.
No pressure at all for the next part, just take your time, you'll find the time.
No pressure at all for the next part, just take your time, you'll find the time.
Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:17 pm
Thx for the props jugs. i will try my best!
Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:13 am
Nice read... a familiar man sitting in his desk? Al Harrington? 
Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:30 am
haha yea i missed that but whatever
good preview, get everyone hyped again heh
good preview, get everyone hyped again heh
Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:37 am
Nice read good job man.
Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:40 am
Wow, that's real obvious 
Joking, good stuff Sit, I can't wait for the next one
Joking, good stuff Sit, I can't wait for the next one
Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:45 am
FINALLY! I just finished off reading the 1,2,3,4, and Chapter 5 preview. Great reads, all of them and lots of drama too. Can't wait for the next one.
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:08 am
rofl, yeah, it's harrington. "Sup, motha f****. Time to die."
Yeah, I quit my dynasty, I'mma do a new one with fantasy draft. Any suggestions?
Yeah, I quit my dynasty, I'mma do a new one with fantasy draft. Any suggestions?
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:11 am
You guys are stupid. It wasn't a dream and the familiar man is the cop. Sit was drunk out of his mind and thought it was a dream.
Am I right or am I right Sit?
Am I right or am I right Sit?