
Fresh wrote:Congrats on making it to 50 replies... and to see ur video card f*ck up
Dee24 wrote:oh geeeezzzz..
Lamrock wrote:Four days.
dare wrote:I have a spare Video Card here
Fresh wrote:Congrats on making it to 50 replies... and to see ur video card f*ck up
Valor wrote:yeah...you have real bad luck Thierry....
Mark. wrote:Gutted about the V-Card dude, but this is looking good. Lamrock has point about your long paragraphs on simmed games. IMO I think the reason you tire of dynastys is that you are putting so much work into them you are getting tired of them. Likewise for the preview, its a really good read, but if your going to do that for every week its going to take far too long to get through a season, that even assuming you dont tire of it before then. Thing is bro, we all want to see you get through a season, I cant wait to see how you present the playoffs and cover the offseason.
I dunno, no offense intended by the above, more giving you my opinion on how you can extend the longevity of it. Big props on the effort you are putting in though. Perhaps if you want to continue with such detail you would be better to do a 29 game season so at least you get to see some progress while still going so in depth in your previews and recaps
The X wrote:Sucks about video card.
Ditto to what Mark said. But I'll put it more bluntly, nobody gives a shit about previews. I don't ever waste my time skimming them. I can understand previewing playoff games/series, but not regular season games. I don't waste my time reading real life previews, let along Association ones. In regards to sim recaps, follow a format similar to Lamrock's.
I know it sounds cliche, but sometimes less truly is more. Get your Association message across in a succinct method. Either way, good luck
dare wrote:Man really tough comments by Mark and The X but I may not be that long here in NLSC to give you some comments but you really need to change your style, sure nice graphics are a plus but it takes them too much time to work and we all know that's tiring. Just go for a simple approach man look at my dynasty I started with a very lame graphical recaps but I changed them to a simple one and I'm almost at the end of my first season. I know my dynasty sucks compare to the others but atleast it's only my 2nd dynasty and it lasted to reach 500 replies. Hope you didn't take it personal I'm still a fan of your dynasties.
Jae wrote:It comes down to your own personal enjoyment of the dynasty. I think judging by the fact that you plow through so many different teams (not just in this but FIFA as well) tells me you probably aren't really that into any of the stories you start, get bored early and want to change. I know what it's like, this Claws association is the first time I've ever not become sick of the team and just simmed through to the off-season. Look at it this way; if you had no internet access and couldn't post your association story, would you play through an entire season with the team? Create or find a situation/scenario that would make you answer "yes" to that question and you'll find a story that you won't give up on or get sick of. You'll also stop worrying so much about replies/followers and try to find a balance between necessary and unnecessary walls of text. Something interesting is always an improvement over something "official"... like The-X said, no one reads previews because they aren't interesting. It might make things look more authentic but does that really matter when you spent X amount of time on it and no one reads it.
Anyway I'm not an expert on writing these stories like The-X/Mark/Lamrock/Sit etc but I know what I like to read, so that's my 2 cents. You're a good writer and your graphics are pretty cool too so I think if you could get your sh*t together with these things you could do some pretty impressive stuff.
Martti. wrote:I agree with X. I'm pretty sure most guys don't even read them. I often just look at the teams you're playing. It will save your time and would probably make things easier. Also more easier for the followers.
anthony22 wrote:i was away for like 5 days and when i sit on the computer and writed forums.nba-live.com,one of the first things on my mind was,thierry will have a new association
anyway i dont like that you choose the C's but good look with it,i hope you'll play this a lot more than the others !
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Week In Pictures.
A look back on the best pictures of the last seven days
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Thierry. wrote:A lot of NLSCers don't like BostonBut I hope I can stay with this story for the time to come.
Thierry. wrote:[color=#23876B]A lot of NLSCers don't like Boston
The X wrote:Truth is you have photoshop & presentation skills to match Mafia's great Answer is Incomplete dynasty & everybody knows that. I think for everybody it's being like watching Tyrus Thomas flounder away![]()
And yes, Jae hit it on the head with what he said about whether you would start an offline dynasty & run it. Every dynasty I've done is for offline enjoyment, but a couple of them have been posted, mainly to keep a running record of it & add more life & character to generics![]()
I'm glad you cut back on previews, they look a lot better now & I actually looked at them for the first time![]()
I do really like that you've added this, but is there any chance on upgrading to a black LCD (wide screen if possible)? The one you got at the moment just doesn't do the rest of your presentation justice
Boston is infinitely more interesting than the Lakers. Are you going to trade Ray Allen (I hope not)?
Valor wrote:Right on the money, I HATE THE CELTICS![]()
so i aint gonna be commenting as much Thierry, no offense and you know i'll be reading still though, just keep it rolling
dare wrote:as Valor said We hate the Celtics...
Martti. wrote:I don't.
Fresh wrote:I think you really will do well with your new association story lay out.You finalyl cut the previews (I told you to a few stories ago...)
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