Need FEEDBACK ||| Juan Dixon v0.001 beta...

My first patch (hehe!) please be gentle! It's still a work-in-progress. I just want some opinions from the patchmasters on this site. Tips and pointers would also be welcome. I plan on having another round of modifications later in the week.




I'm a Terp alumnus and i'm going go through and update alot of the former Terps that were done wrong by EA . Juan first, then Stevie Franchiise and then probably Wilcox or Baxter.

Also: Can someone provide a good link to a plain white Jersey Template file with pretty good textures? I think I'm going to be making some practice gear as well:D .

Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

((PEACE)) [/b]

Last edited by ausar72 on Fri Mar 11, 2005 12:21 am, edited 1 time in total.

The part where the face is meeting the head needs to blended better.
Also,he smiles alot more than he scowls.
Otherwise i think it looks pretty good for a starter

You are talking about the dark part on the forehead right?

Also, the face i used has a smile, but for some reason he has a scowl when I apply it in the game. Does this have anything to do with the head shape files?

Yes, You need to blend the cheeks and the forehead some more. You should be happy that the headshape closes his mouth a little, or else you would have two set of teeth................. which is worse.

Keep workimg on it, it has potential

David

My first patch (hehe!) please be gentle! It's still a work-in-progress. I just want some opinions from the patchmasters on this site. Tips and pointers would also be welcome. I plan on having another round of modifications later in the week.




I'm a Terp alumnus and i'm going go through and update alot of the former Terps that were done wrong by EA . Juan first, then Stevie Franchiise and then probably Wilcox or Baxter.

Also: Can someone provide a good link to a plain white Jersey Template file with pretty good textures? I think I'm going to be making some practice gear as well:D .

Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

((PEACE)) [/b]

I think it's a good cyberface for a beginner...

For the jerseys; have you tried JB's tutorial and textures?
Or else, try checking this page http://www.angelfire.com/rpg/ewl/index2.html

Looking forward to that Chris Wilcox face... he hasn't been patched so many times before.