Sat Jun 21, 2003 7:23 am
It better but you still have a ways to go right now your patches are kind of sloppy 
(constructive criticism) the face isn't straight... the hairline isn't straight...but I still see the potential in it...keep trying it will come 
(constructive criticism) the face isn't straight... the hairline isn't straight...but I still see the potential in it...keep trying it will come
Sat Jun 21, 2003 8:26 am
i suggest a new headshape and better positioning, the nose and the mouth both are too wide.
Sat Jun 21, 2003 10:13 am
I suggest to try another headshape, especially coz of the ears....
anyways, U made a decent job on this second face...keep up !
anyways, U made a decent job on this second face...keep up !
Sat Jun 21, 2003 9:11 pm
i think the headshape is perfect 
so just try move the nose, and make the mouth smaller... then it will be nice
so just try move the nose, and make the mouth smaller... then it will be nice
Tue Jun 24, 2003 2:32 am
narrow up the eyes... the headshape might be ok if you can narrow the eyes and lips like others suggested.
its definitely got potential though!
its definitely got potential though!